I just gave this a read and wow. Now the prologue is what need to be done well, especially in a fantasy setting, if the writer isn't focusing their time to introduce the characters and the immersion of the story, then it just feels like a run-on-a-mill Webnovel story. But after reading, the prologue left me impress. Now for the writing. It is questionable as we have something, for an example, like "*boom*" written down rather than having to describe that an explosion happen and seeing the reactions as it unfold. But world background is there, and character design is perfect. Do I recommend this Webnovel and want to see it become adapted at some point, well yeah
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