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Coolguy
CoolguyLv52mth
2024-09-02 16:11

The first few chapters are a bit slow and highly descriptive, then ‘hula’ the pace goes up and then we suddenly have fast-paced chapters with lots of new characters and events unfolding which is a lot to digest in the short time which feels better in middle of novel rather than the beginning. I feel the sentences are a bit overly descriptive which feels kinda long and a bit boring when reading it. It definitely has some funny elements to it which is good. It might be just me but I feel some words like *APPEAR*, *GLOW*, *GLARE* and *MERGE* appeared a bit awkward. It felt like the world development and side character are overly prioritized than the main character as I found we get the mention of mc only after a few chapters. Still, you can see that the author has done a lot of research to include the gods of many different regions trying to blend them into one world. Overall, this novel has good potential but needs a bit of improvement.

God Of Humanity

DreamReaper
4.3
48 Chs

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DylanHusand
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Woah... you're writing style is so good!

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Legendary_Sparrow
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It has a good and interesting premise, however, the sentence structures need work

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ATLS
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My main problems with this novel are the sentence structure/grammar and the occasionally clunky dialogue. However, the rest of the story is definitely on fire; multi-cultural Gods and Goddesses, a funny main character, and no idea where things will go next. I look forward to the wild ride ahead of Rey!

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NamhyeBlueMoon
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I’ve read the first five chapters and I think the story has potential, but it’s still finding its footing. The premise of gods influencing humanity is interesting and has a lot of room for exciting plot twists, but so far, the story feels like it's moving a bit slowly. Overall, "God of Humanity" has the foundation of a compelling story, There’s potential here. So Goodluck Author! Keep it up[img=recommend][img=update]

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EdgingSystem
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The beginning starts off rough, but after a while the story gets very good. The Character design is probably the best part, the story is interesting. Highly recommend the author re-write the first few chapters, this story has high potential!

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DreamReaper
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Actions speak better than words. I won't say much as this is the start of "God Of Humanity" the Sequel.

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The_Broken_Author
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Altogether a nice novel, encompassing knowledge of several gods from different regions of the world. I must say the author really did I nice job. That aside, the novel progresses slowly, introducing several gods at a time. However, the writers skills are amazing, not perfect, but wonderful. It adds the thrill to the read. It's definitely worth the read.

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JWB_Kante
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This book has a great potential if the author put more effort on it but I'm afraid the prologue seems a bit rough with the convo, apart from that, everything is cool with the setting

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Danespl
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A great book indeed. But, am worried about the start. You revealed a lot of information that was supposed to be hidden, thus making the readers know the end. Apart from that, a suggested library as been created for this.

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