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Hanish_Ram
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2024-07-07 04:55

It would have been better if you didn’t give mc the powers like barrier control it would be better if had given him slow evolution and adaptability which is very slow it would have been awesome for some character development please consider but your remaining novels I read you maintain good quality but please consider to give mc some high potential and slow growth powers it would be 👍

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IdleMuse0307
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Yeah, I have something like that in the works but that would be another fanfic entirely. Sorry for that but the next one will have more focus on character development and slice of life than just powers and major events. Thank you for reading!

Helia_King
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This review makes no sense to be on this fanfic, cause honestly you should have just left a review about the fanfic and just requested that at the end or just left to find one with that power set.

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