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Who gives tombstone such importance isn’t he a third rated villain you are making like mysterious boss he is not even kingpin
What about the other people mc helped is there no hero points why did he help is it because he is good guy why only 15 points for 15 criminal previously he got 10 points easily for one criminal and these all had automatic weapons and what about the full night crime stopping many times where are the points for them
Good i guess
Single is best don’t spoil the plot
Why didn’t he show powers to the guys first and asked them to stay together not separate why always show powers at last
Why not show them his powers before all began why play mysterious as there is no mole to inform the creeper about Mc powers
Why not show them his powers and warn them why not be realistic
Mc has become more crueler and author has become more muddle headed why violence can’t you just sneak in by just normally why unnecessary violence and why waste two chapters on this
Felt Ai in the chapter
How are mutants there here if it’s MCU as mutants are still not introduced