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I came looking for copper and found gems, joke intended. Aside from the fact that the tone of the fanfic is darker than I expected, I have nothing negative to say. The pace is slow, but that is clearly the intention and it is not to the detriment of the fanfic, on the contrary, I would say it is a strong point. The author manages to create a description of the characters' inner emotions and thoughts that really makes you feel immersed in them. It is a great read and I genuinely don't understand where the author got the legendary lost ability to combine multiple points of view into a coherent and engaging narrative.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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cryzsalix
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My only complaint would be not having a ton of chapters to read right now.

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Thank you for the long review! The thing of found a "gem" is awesome lol, it's the second person to say that. I'm very happy being well reviwed by another author, this was my first attempt. I hope we can stay together for a long time and thank you again.