cryzsalix

I agree with most of the comments, converting Boyd came out of the blue and seemed more like something he did on a whim compared to how much thought went into converting those who were super close to him.

Wow, those conversations were really fun, I like the dynamic between Scott and Alisson, and obviously the friendship with Stiles is always a mess. Maybe my only request would be more emphasis on the romantic moments between Alisson and Scott, occasionally of course, I'm not asking for the story to change its genre to something super cheesy.

I get it, it just cheapens Allison's character a lot. They did something similar with her and another character in the series, but it made even less sense and just made her look like a whore.

friendship is also nice

I'm not 100% happy with the course Allison is taking, though it's nice that their friendship is recovering. On the other hand, Malia's development is super cute and I like her friendship with Erika. Author, if you're reading this, make the FinnxMaliaxAlisson route real... or don't, it's more of a preference than a strong opinion.

The whole thing with Alisson seems a bit forced. I understand that her aunt's death affected her but it makes very little sense that it would just make her walk away from Finn and throw herself into Scott's arms for no reason.

You kind of made Allison look too easy with this back and forth of her sleeping with whoever when she's sad.

Malia and Allison at the same time for the win. But assuming you don't like that route, I think what you're planning is fine. I prefer fewer twists and turns, mainly because breakups are sad and jealousy is less fun when there is actually a losing side.

I personally enjoyed the R18 scene, and I think you were very clever in handling the Alisson thing, laying a foundation for possible romantic development in the future but developing it into a more pleasant friendship for now, finally leaving the silly misunderstandings behind.