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2024-09-13 12:49

The novel was good at first, even the idea in general is good, but the rationality and development of the story, especially the character of the protagonist, ruin the novel. The protagonist is mentally ill and narcissistic. When you live in a world with multiple creatures from different races, you do not kill or enslave them, but rather see who you can cooperate with and benefit from their skills, especially when there is an opponent who is several times stronger than you. Rather, you try to unify all the forces available to you. As for the rational and aggressive creatures who insist on killing or war, whether from the same race or not, they are disposed of because do not forget that they are part of the world of magic, and magicians are part of this world as well. And if ordinary humans discover the world of magic and know about the lack of mercy and the ability to communicate and establish political relationships in magicians, their first idea is that this part of humanity is dangerous to us and we must get rid of them because if they can kill and enslave creatures that did not harm them just for the sake of control, they can do the same thing to us. And do not forget that these rational creatures are also part of the strength of the world of magic in times of need. If the protagonist's thoughts remained in his mind without affecting the world of magic, I wouldn't have a problem, but this idiot is trying to start a revolution. I don't mind a revolution if it's for the right reasons, but after reading the last chapters, I noticed that his thoughts are not as pure as he mentioned in the previous chapters. On top of that, he is trying to influence the minds of the children under his care by using magic to follow his thoughts. Of course, the novel did not mention anything about execution or slavery, but I feel that the novel is going in this direction because it agrees with the wizards of ancient times on their enslavement of house elves and his fear of goblins because they control money and he tries to destroy the economy of the wizarding world by putting fake money in the market. The economy of the wizarding world is cohesive because no one knows how to fake money and humans are more greedy than goblins if you did not notice. The reality is that the bank is a partnership between the ministry and the goblin kingdom and goblins work there because they are good with money and respect the law and promises and have strict laws in their kingdom so they were put there. Do not think that their greed is that they will steal the money in the bank or freeze the money at their will. There are contracts that prevent you from doing that except by order of the ministry. The way they are greedy is by deceiving others to raise the level of services without mentioning cheaper goods to get more money or raise the percentage of their service above the reasonable limit. This is what was mentioned in the Harry Potter books that they try to fraud but in legal ways and There are magic contracts that if they break them they will die or worse.🙂‍↕️I will keep reading if events change I will update my review

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