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synncrytech3
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no way the author hasn't been deleting reviews. if you value your brain health, stay away from this bowel extruder. wiritng quality is horrible.A bunch of Grammer errors everywhere. Dialogue Is inconsistent and the author can't make up his mind on using - ' " or just nothing at all on dialogue. progression is not very descriptive, it feels like a rough draft. Also the author doesnt know what bending is, In an avatar fic.

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DivineDeviance
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yeah, its everywhere, its not like a 1 time mistake, in every place where "bending" should be used, its always "magic". According to some guy this is a russian story translated to english, so idk.

XenonNoble:Eww really? That’s a another red flag for me bro. I get what you mean but if an author can’t even correctly say the main power source of a story, I wouldn’t be confident in the rest of the story quality (only exception is if story is specifically AU).
DivineDeviance
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oh, and I also dont get why the author keeps calling bending 'magic' thats mad weird. But again, not the end of the world.

XenonNoble
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Eww really? That’s a another red flag for me bro. I get what you mean but if an author can’t even correctly say the main power source of a story, I wouldn’t be confident in the rest of the story quality (only exception is if story is specifically AU).

DivineDeviance:oh, and I also dont get why the author keeps calling bending 'magic' thats mad weird. But again, not the end of the world.