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Rakshahsa
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2024-07-01 22:12

I don't know what to write. I am horrible at reviews, hence I don't tend to do them, but I liked it the story was nice, was that good? Praise me.

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Alex_Simmonds
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Good job! Thanks for the Review, I always appreciate your comments :)

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