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Review Detail of Whadyamean in Exorcist of the American Nightmares

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Whadyamean
WhadyameanLv45mthWhadyamean

The story and premise is good, but overall is a terrible reading experience. Grammar and sentence structure is so horrendus tha an AI would do a better job writing a story. I have to filter the text I’m reading like I’m reading a Xuxia cultivation novel x2, it’s that bad. The conflict in the story is also terrible as there’s no tension, or worry as the terrible writing quality draws from the experience. This story would be interesting if there was an editor to fix all the mistakes. However I tried and I can’t read any further the grammar and way everyone interacts, talks and thinks is borderline robotic. I made it to chapter 62 before stopping thinking it’d get better, it dosen’t

Exorcist of the American Nightmares

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Disukai oleh 9 orang

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan

I think there is a better version. Pray for us priest or something like that.

Sorrias
SorriasLv5Sorrias

Congratulations you described 99% of all chinese fiction you just forgot the xenophobia, ccp boot licking, pro dictatorship propaganda, democracy mocking and racism

Tommy_Wood
Tommy_WoodLv14Tommy_Wood

'priest, pray for us' is the better version