Review Detail of Haizao in The Demon's Fated Bride

The pacing is good and the plot moves along at a decent pace, balancing world-building with establishing the main characters. There's definitely an air of mystery surrounding Eliana's whole situation and unfolding it - and the way the world reacts to the heroine's fate - offers to be dramatic. There's a well-defined Beauty And The Beast-like feeling with a bit of a bad-boy male lead. It's definitely a worthwhile read and the quality is there in the writing, it just needs a little refinement to polish out some of the repetition and a few word choices that aren't optimal. Additionally, what I read left plenty of room to develop Helios beyond the surface-level bad-boy, and I'm sure as the novel progresses we'll see different sides of him.