Review Detail of riser_7877 in the frozen slayer

Sup, the author here, so I know I need a lot of improvement but becuase it apparently mandatory I need to give it 5 stars, even though I decently no it’s not, well not yet. Thank you for reading this and if possible I would appreciate a comment or two just saying what could be improved or what’s good, or even what you lot would like to see. Have a great day/ night *\(^o^)/*