Review Detail of zowji in Summer: a tale of burning desires

I don't read 18+ web novels very often but I like where the plot is going. the overall plot structure is good but in terms of the story pace it's a bit slow so I feel your characters are all over the place reading at some points in the story but you have an excellent distribution of dialogue. You also have a distinctive writing style that separates you from other authors which is a huge positive, but I'd like to say you should keep writing this story. Keep working hard author! :D