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The novel's premise doesn't exactly establish a main character from the start. But the overall quality of the writing is solid, which can be improved on with just general spacing and splitting paragraphs and sentences when needed. I still like the progression of the novel and the pacing is just about fine in terms of getting through the scenes, Great work Author!
no chapter for today, unfortunately i’m preparing to end the season for this novel and go on a short break to developing on a new novel that i’ve been working on! It won’t be for long of course, as i’ll be focusing on both novels equally at a time. So all i can ask for is your support for this novel and my next upcoming project!!! 😄 TYSM FOR CHOOSING THIS NOVEL <3
No word better to describe it than crackle ≽^-⩊-^≼
This lines just implies that Jan would've done the same.
yup! Valencia was saying this.
huhu metaphorical of course!