Review Detail of canadam in Five Hearts, One Pulse

Item: Five Hearts, One Pulse
Rating: 3.8

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canadamLv18mthcanadam

Good story but currently (chapter 3) needs way more world building and development on the characters, lots of unexplained settings and character mannerisms

Five Hearts, One Pulse

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Balasan1

MazouPenulisMazou

thank you for the comment I plan on expanding on the world-building it’s just going to take some time in order to get there, I appreciate the criticism.

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