"Fuck your house!" Connor screamed out loud. "Fuck your house and all its motherfucking memories; fuck it and fuck its history! Fuck everyone involved with this piece of sh*t we're standing on because nobody gives a fuck!"
A few wordy sentences and I still don’t know what the main characters look like or much about their personalities which is something I want to know, other than that I really like this chapter
Good story but currently (chapter 3) needs way more world building and development on the characters, lots of unexplained settings and character mannerisms