Review Detail of SoulNexus in The Collapsed World

The only that doesn't quite made me happy with the story is that ,the problem with some phrases in the story.I don't know if it's a metaphor but it didn't seem liked.And another thing yeh story is slow burn, I don't know why but it's felt like that and I can't relate to the charecter as each of them are like scammed.The world is great and the author had thinked a lot for the story.Keep if up one day it will blow.