Its a nice drama to read! Feels like I'm reading a classical tv show from around 2005. I liked the way that the characters are developed and how they interact. The setup of the MC with her family as well. To improve: Writing: There are some minor issues with the writing that can broke off the readability a bit, but nothing a rewrite resolves. All in all, keep up the good work
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