Review Detail of sage5156 in Fate / Lost Avian (anime multiverse)
Ulasan detail
This story is UNREADABLE. The Grammer is HORRENDOUS, and it's written like it was made by a 5 year old. the whole story is just a bunch of nonsensical sentences that barely make any sense and is on par with the worst translation you could ever find.
Fate / Lost Avian (anime multiverse)
Lotus_8171
Disukai oleh 4 orang
SUKABalasan1
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it reads like a narration that went through broken translation and is probably the first attempt at writing because the amount of small details like cooking, cleaning, morning routines like brushing your teeth or washing your face are not need unless the action has a event or slice of life aspect to it in which the character does exposition/exploration of something important or meaningful to character or plot development.