Honestly this could be a good story but I just genuinely can't read it. Nothing makes sense at all and the way the author describes things just leaves me more confused. Like Zuri is a 10cm being who is an ai that gathers info for him and swings his sword for him?? or does she help him swing his sword?? i honestly don't know. The fight scenes are so poorly explained it's like he writes out a whole fight scene, then deletes parts to make it as confusing as possible. The MC will do something you don't understand, then the enemy will put both hands on the ground to brace for impact, then the MC will just attack them from behind, like what?? Even the characters will just completely change their expressions and actions within seconds, someone will be introduced as cool and calculating then act like a literal child 2 secs later, MC included. I just don't understand this novel. Thanks for reading
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