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JCTLv49mth
2024-01-20 06:46

i was expecting starship troopers world and the rest are extra spice tech procurement you should change the title 🧐 the novel in a more appropriate cause this novel contains almost all Warhammer so far while the starship troopers as main world was treated as fast word type I'll change my review once i readt it whole I'm currently at the half its not it's not bad the title turn it bad

Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System

Lee_Kah
4.3
221 Chs

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JCT
JCTLv4

this is literally just Warhammer story telling it's more entertaining to just play it 🥴the main world is Warhammer starship troopers and the rest are fast-forward logs scene just contains few chaps

9mth
Lee_Kah
Lee_KahAuthor

I know,but after I am done with it, starship troopers will be more chapters, as i need time to flesh out the lore of the starship troopers and i need to read the books of the starship troopers. as it will be slowly turned into the books that I been reading.

JCT:this is literally just Warhammer story telling it's more entertaining to just play it 🥴the main world is Warhammer starship troopers and the rest are fast-forward logs scene just contains few chaps
9mth
JCT
JCTLv4

change the title and synopsis the readers will be twitching expecting something but in reverse like expecting starship as a main world due to the synopsis but due to the lack of chapters in the main world the expectations turned confused of sort 😅 in turned into just a game scenematic from gameplay with a self insert

Lee_Kah:I know,but after I am done with it, starship troopers will be more chapters, as i need time to flesh out the lore of the starship troopers and i need to read the books of the starship troopers. as it will be slowly turned into the books that I been reading.
9mth
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Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5

Pretty good novel qnd Unique i realy love this. Updates are little bit unstable but you can survive. Also author use complicated words that i need to check on google what they meaning is. But overall good. P.S. Read your selfs if wanna know the story

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King_Jong
King_JongLv4

5/5 for warhammer. Nn

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Linus279
Linus279Lv4

The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision

1yr
SPBasilio
SPBasilioLv12

Interesting, very interesting! I like it!

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Deitz
DeitzLv12

I'm sure in whatever the native language of the author this makes more sense. However, this is barely readable in English. Sentences are capitalized every other word. You will see sentences that say, " Wow How you Know You amazing!" and that's the least of the grammatical sins. I'm sure there is a plot buried under there somewhere, but it's too painful to find.

11mth
Colossus_Eye
Colossus_EyeLv15

Love me a good book!

1yr
orangegummy
orangegummyLv13

no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine

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Grandtheacup
GrandtheacupLv5

Honestly I have an hard time enjoying this story. The whole back and forth between 40k and starship trooper is kind of breaking my immersion for the story. Wished you made two stories rather than 1.

9mth
Asanhan_Zumaev_7988
Asanhan_Zumaev_7988Lv1

In general, everything is fine, but the grammar is a little lame, there are words that are not clear, but otherwise everything is great, thanks for the translation. I am writing with the help of a translator .

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