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Deitz
DeitzLv1211mth
2023-12-15 21:39

I'm sure in whatever the native language of the author this makes more sense. However, this is barely readable in English. Sentences are capitalized every other word. You will see sentences that say, " Wow How you Know You amazing!" and that's the least of the grammatical sins. I'm sure there is a plot buried under there somewhere, but it's too painful to find.

Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System

Lee_Kah
4.3
221 Chs

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Anton_Shudder
Anton_ShudderLv14

that's the exact reason I stopped ready I toughed it out til chapter 30 hoping it would get better but it doesn't and it just ruins it when instead of relaxing I have to work to enjoy the book

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Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5

Pretty good novel qnd Unique i realy love this. Updates are little bit unstable but you can survive. Also author use complicated words that i need to check on google what they meaning is. But overall good. P.S. Read your selfs if wanna know the story

1yr

King_Jong
King_JongLv4

5/5 for warhammer. Nn

1yr
Linus279
Linus279Lv4

The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision

1yr
SPBasilio
SPBasilioLv12

Interesting, very interesting! I like it!

1yr
Colossus_Eye
Colossus_EyeLv15

Love me a good book!

1yr
orangegummy
orangegummyLv13

no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine

7mth
Grandtheacup
GrandtheacupLv5

Honestly I have an hard time enjoying this story. The whole back and forth between 40k and starship trooper is kind of breaking my immersion for the story. Wished you made two stories rather than 1.

9mth
JCT
JCTLv4

i was expecting starship troopers world and the rest are extra spice tech procurement you should change the title 🧐 the novel in a more appropriate cause this novel contains almost all Warhammer so far while the starship troopers as main world was treated as fast word type I'll change my review once i readt it whole I'm currently at the half its not it's not bad the title turn it bad

9mth
Asanhan_Zumaev_7988
Asanhan_Zumaev_7988Lv1

In general, everything is fine, but the grammar is a little lame, there are words that are not clear, but otherwise everything is great, thanks for the translation. I am writing with the help of a translator .

10mth
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