Item: GOT lion with antlers
Rating: 3.8

NewnoobLv42yr

2022-10-29 16:21

Author you need a beta tester. The fic has potential but it is full of mistakes. Especially the conversations between MC and other people. Also you should use parentheses ( ), instead of using hyphens - when talking with the system. Also the plot is well written but badly executed. So please if you give more importance in the quality of the fic than you'll definitely get the recognition you deserve.

GOT lion with antlers

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