Review Detail of FREAKKETTONE in Gods of Gods in The World of Swords and Magic (DROPPED)

Nice story until now, the author manmaged to place the groundwork of the story, but I have to tell you that you have to improve your English. There are some typos but that's not the problem, the problem is the very difficult to follow flow of the writing style and the many repetitions that make the read much heavier and boring. The world building and character design are very well made until now, great expectations. I hope you improve your writing that would make the novel that much better and fun to read. Keep it up, I'll keep it in sight.