Review Detail of DaoistIszN4K in Spinning as Naruto
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Well first I don't understand what ability the protagonist has secondly we have to understand the character of the protagonist Third we are tired of fan novels that take the original story path unchanged Don't try to make the Zappoza arc exist even man you are not the unlucky Naruto who will get this Exactly the mission, and also, raising Sasuke's talent and power doesn't make him like the original story. Give him some illusion talents and higher abilities than Chunin, and other than the Mangekyo ability, doesn't make it the Amateros, it's a useless ability.
Spinning as Naruto
Lor_D_Twigo
Liked it!
SUKABalasan5
Second thank you for pointing out that I haven’t fleshed out his character I will try to focus on that more lastly the story will divert from cannon I just like the bridge builder arc Thank you for commenting have a blessed day
Lor_D_Twigo:His ability is spiral energy from Gurren laggen. I don’t think I’m boosting Sauske because if I remember correctly he beat both of them in cannon by him self.
And why did you take the time? You could have built and developed the character instead of making him another stupid man
Lor_D_Twigo:Second thank you for pointing out that I haven’t fleshed out his character I will try to focus on that more lastly the story will divert from cannon I just like the bridge builder arc Thank you for commenting have a blessed day
Lor_D_Twigo:His ability is spiral energy from Gurren laggen. I don’t think I’m boosting Sauske because if I remember correctly he beat both of them in cannon by him self.