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Hey man, just a few things need tweaking and keep going on this story it's awesome awesome awesome I still want to know will he take the frost demon bloodline? Or become an Android? Or take Babedi's magical knowledge? Pretend to be a Babedi soldier and get a power-up? Lots of crazy things Just complete the story and my rating will be 5 stars
Well first I don't understand what ability the protagonist has secondly we have to understand the character of the protagonist Third we are tired of fan novels that take the original story path unchanged Don't try to make the Zappoza arc exist even man you are not the unlucky Naruto who will get this Exactly the mission, and also, raising Sasuke's talent and power doesn't make him like the original story. Give him some illusion talents and higher abilities than Chunin, and other than the Mangekyo ability, doesn't make it the Amateros, it's a useless ability.
Stupid Who will get rid of a person of the level of a Kage just to please another village? If he will satisfy the rest of the villages and then declare war? Silly nonsense and why Rasa? He is a strong person Choose any weak person or tell a spy that he killed another spy
Max is an ordinary man who has become in an imaginary world, so as long as he does not treat everything as a fantasy world and does anything without conscience, he is an ordinary man who is not evil. He is 600 years old and does not care about friendship or fun, so the comparison is completely wrong. He is in the end just an ordinary man. Why is he brainwashing? Those close to him will make him empty this has feelings in the end
I don't care. The goals and personalities are different. There is no reason for Max to sacrifice his friends, and Max is a person whose age is not 600 years old to see friendship as nothing. And if he didn't sacrifice his friends or was more evil, this would make Fang Yuan better? Why the comparison? What they lived is completely different, how can he be without any humanity and live bleak all his life just to look more evil what you do is a childish thing