(says chapter 2, i read all 5 chapters on my phone but am writing on my computer) My only problem with this is that it's too short right now :\ i love this novel so far, it's a really nice read so far and the double main characters/pov makes it even better and even more interesting. I have no problems with the grammar as well, the writing flows fairly nicely. Can't wait to see how this story is fleshed out, and to read further interactions between our 2 protagonists
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