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Stantheman1322 years agoBalas SanchoPanzaSauce?
- Stantheman1322 years agoBalas boom_boom_8806
Just read the manga for So I'm a spider so what
- Stantheman1323 years agoBalas oday_farid
jazz lmao
- Stantheman1323 years agoBerkomentar
well shit
- Stantheman1323 years agoBerkomentar
how do u make text bold and italics on webnovel? please tell me, i need to know lmao
- Stantheman1323 years agoBerkomentar
oh that head bruh
- Stantheman1323 years agoBalas Black_Jesus_0229
some might even say that penguinz are swimming in it right now
- Stantheman1323 years agoBerkomentarParagraf ini telah dihapus.
- Stantheman1323 years agoDiterbitkan
The concept of this novel is great. However, there are a few flaws. First off, the character of Anya has a few moments of immaturity that don't really fit the vibe she gave off at first. Second, the grammar, while readable, does contain a few small mistakes that need to be corrected in each chapter. That should be fixed. Overall a very good start though
Buku ini telah dihapus. - Stantheman1323 years agoDiterbitkan
(says chapter 2, i read all 5 chapters on my phone but am writing on my computer) My only problem with this is that it's too short right now :\ i love this novel so far, it's a really nice read so far and the double main characters/pov makes it even better and even more interesting. I have no problems with the grammar as well, the writing flows fairly nicely. Can't wait to see how this story is fleshed out, and to read further interactions between our 2 protagonists
