Review Detail of Stantheman132 in Ruler of [Blank](Shifted)

This story seems pretty good so far, but has a few significant issues that hold it back from being very good, if not great. The first major problem is the writing. The grammar is not the best, which could possibly cause readers to be turned off from reading this novel. The second issue i have with it is that it seems kind of surface level with the characters. A bit more depth put into the characters would make this story so much better. Good job so far, author, but it needs a bit of work. It says chapter 3 but thats because i only read up to chapter 3 on my computer, i read up to chapter 9 on my phone but am writing this review on my computer