I know my grammar is technically terrible but i will do my best to improve . I hope you will like the novel . if you will have any suggestions or comments don't be shy to share ... @Evergreen
EverGreen
Disukai oleh 21 orang
SUKAInteresting story. However, grammar and consistency with cultivation realms, character names and pretty much everything is really really bad. Do you plan to rewrite from the beginning? I’m 70 chapters in and it’s very frustrating trying to figure out what’s happening with all of the inconsistencies. I’ll probably drop this and hopefully things get better and try to revisit later down the road.