Review Detail of LOF in The Legendary Mage (The Legendary Mechanic fanfic)

Don't drop, even if it turns out to not be good, don't drop, there is no legendary fanfic and i want to read one. Or if it's not good just do a Rewrite, your story will become known eventually don't stress, you're on of the only one who did a legendary mechanic ff so, Just Do It.