please change the review to something else. This reads like a virgins plea to her first time sex

So bro you found any TLM fanfic worth reading?

the story as of chapter 40 is good. the character interactions requires a little refinement but the characters themselves are acting as they would have in a game only characters with prolonged exposure have shown personalities. this means that any character worth more screen time that one or two chapters the author has given a better personality than the regular cardboard cutouts. the story progression is also quite good. the mc personality is something i like, he is not some beta who goes after every female with a good looks like a dog. In-fact the mc is a no bullshit type of guy, if someone annoys him or has a annoying personality then he makes sure to clearly draw the line. the only negative thing in this novel is that nobody ever finds the mc mumbling his thoughts to himself, like he mumbles insult, plans and so much sh*t that already someone should have already found him out.

i just have a small doubt why does he need to say everything out loud? if it was for the skill then he could have simply murmured it under his breath. and why is nobody catching him when he is doing as so right next to them. other wise the book is excellent.

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read this novel in scribble hub there the author posts ai generated images of characters and places

its been a really long and they don't matter much in the large scale of things.

can you update these with the latest known rankings please.

right now the number shot past 6 and going higher

hahaha noice one

thanks for the chapter it was good

thanks for the chapter. good character closure.

i cried a litlle. Little only.

In telugu aaya means a maid.

So are there two gods like the first one who grants him the perfect memory and the second one grants him the intelligence to use the so called memory?

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for those of you interested in reading a litrpg power progression that's certainly unique in combination with some other fantasy tropes mixed to create a perfect blender of a novel. i recommend this to you.

He’s gonna get a class through this method?

bro try using chatgpt to edit your novel it works.

that definitely felt unsatisfying(the parents got off too easy). the main thing you can improve in the short term is your writing style. this is different from grammar. you can introduce titles or new skills and their descriptions in different kind of parenthesis. the scene change could also use something like page break. this helps tremendously.