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The_Young_Flash
The_Young_FlashLv44yr
2020-06-20 22:31

Excellent story, I mean grammatically speaking very engaging, the way you write it keeps the readers drawn in. Now I see the author is going for an actual story like novel instead of the bull**** op mc that we usually see happening. All I can say it is awesome, people will say they don't want a whiney mc since that all he is doing right now but just do you and don't mind them. Trauma is normal after a tragic experience and with all the op-ness on this site, people forget that characters in novels are still normal people. The only thing I can say that would make this better is if he looses his dependency on Edythe and falls for a human, flesh it out a bit. Then have her kill the human in a fit of rage, because right now it's looking weird. We can read it is mutual but it seems he is too desperate for her, it throws off the balance if she isn't as desperate for him. So make her show that she is more obsessive towards him and not just say it. Besides all novels deserve a little tragedy.

Twilight: A New Type of Shifter

FormerDelinquent
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16 Chs

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FormerDelinquent
FormerDelinquentAuthor

Dude, Edythe literally stalked him and watched him while he was sleeping. That's obsession if I've ever seen it. Also, Will's imprinted on Edythe - he can't fall for another girl. I could maybe have a girl fall for him but that wouldn't have the same effect because Will would barely react to her and that wouldn't incite Edythe's jealousy. Other than that, thanks for the review! It means a lot!

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Ok I already fell in love with this story, the grammar is top notch and the layout and writing style couldn't be any better in my opinion. And if you looking for a story which has real people interactions and characters who have a real personality with development, then this story is 100% for you. Its not some edgy dude being reincarnated with ten million wishes and ***** slapping the MC's. Its a genuine story with well thought out plans and ideas and I cannot wait to see where its going to go. xD

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Legendary_Person
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This story is awesome, our not much is known about our Mc other than him not being from Forks and his self-hatred and guilt towards his sister who is suffering from Coma. The Mc is a shapeshifter who imprinted on Edward's sister, he is a bit clumsy about his behaviour around Edward's sister and is overall a proper teenager with a slightly mature personality though he is still controlled by his emotions. The writing quality is top-notch, the background development needs a little work though I wouldn't judge yet as not many chapters have been posted. Character development is very high and overall you must give this a try. I do hope that Mc thinks more about himself and his safety instead of Edward's sister and try to master phasing as soon as possible after all, he should be able to take care of enemy vampires. Just work on his personality a bit more and I hope to see him act more maturely around a potential danger who are the Cullens. The world is cruel and no one can be trusted and he even has to take care of his sister in a coma so it will be better to act 'professional'.

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I got hooked and am now sad there hasn't been a chapter in months I just want more chapters he left off on such a cliffhanger bruh I hope he comes back to post more

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Nooooooooooooo i want more!!! This is great, it feels so real(For twilight universe) Is really well written. And i love the obsesion betwen Will and Edythe :'(

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Doesn't have much of a chapter yet but I'll still give my review. So far, as of chapter 16, it has been a good read for me. Although I didn't really like the dramatic parts but meh, it was necessary for the plot to move on. Also, I'll be honest with you author-san. At first, I really thought it was humongousaur from Ben10 or whatever that cartoon's name was. Then, I read that the MC is gaining some feline characteristics so I had to look at the cover once again and gave it a good 3 mins stare. Then, I finally knew that it was a tiger(my webnovel app have - for some reason - some problems with loading pictures so I can't see it quite clearly)

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Tartarus
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This story is awesome, our not much is known about our Mc other than him not being from Forks and his self-hatred and guilt towards his sister who is suffering from Coma. The Mc is a shapeshifter who imprinted on Edward's sister, he is a bit clumsy about his behaviour around Edward's sister and is overall a proper teenager with a slightly mature personality though he is still controlled by his emotions. The writing quality is top-notch, the background development needs a little work though I wouldn't judge yet as not many chapters have been posted. Character development is very high and overall you must give this a try. I do hope that Mc thinks more about himself and his safety instead of Edward's sister and try to master phasing as soon as possible after all, he should be able to take care of enemy vampires. Just work on his personality a bit more and I hope to see him act more maturely around a potential danger who are the Cullens. The world is cruel and no one can be trusted and he even has to take care of his sister in a coma so it will be better to act 'professional'.

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