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I couldn't get past the 4th chap cause it was just to contridicting like didn't you say you remove gaudlets on the very first page, but just a few pages later you introduce it. then you when the mc ask if he travel to different worlds the system basically states that he has to have a power that allows that but he didn't get it, but 2 chap later the system has a function dealing with world travel. and abilities that the mc gets are just broken especially for the world he's in and then the system says he can't summon a servent that could destroy the universe and balence which stupid since the mc basically does all that he can literally snap his fingers and destroy everything so I'm dropping this novel here since their is literally no thoughts or efforts put into this. the grammar was just terrible and makes it the novel even worst.

Shadow Lord in the dxd verse

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