I am Author Novel
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I like the story; at least it's not like most Naruto stories that only use a system. This one is quite good for me, and the story development is pretty decent, even though there are some strange things here and there. But overall, I can say it's quite good, so just keep going.
Lol, this is a very stupid reader.
Wait! Because they are taken from the Nasuverse! Doesn't that mean the Counter Force Alaya will realize there is a missing Heroic Spirit? Come on, friend! Don't create a poor plot hole! You know that even if Tiamat and Goetia are missing, there will surely be chaos, so are you going to let Alaya become a plot hole? Oh forget it.
Crazy! Solomon? True Magic? What is True Magic Ke Lima? Blue Magic? Crazy! A very loyal writer! Will you take Type-Moon stories like Apocrypha? And Strange Fake? And the characters from No Kyoukai? I hope this becomes a good story!
Trashy story, MC too dominant, story too fast, MC's brain is trashy, power too crazy, poor story theme, truly a sad novel. Trashy. Trashy.Trashy
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Oh? Oh? It seems like I have found a pretty good piece of work this time?
Oh my goodness, why are there so many cliché stories like this now? Stories where the author reincarnates into the world of the novel they created? Aren't there any new concept novels?
Pffff-hehehehe... Are you serious? An Extra POV?