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MrNewWorld

MrNewWorld

Lv10

Poor random otaku

2024-04-14 BergabungBrazil
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18.1h

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152

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  • MrNewWorld
    MrNewWorld2h
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    Gonna be honest with what I expect from a first time novel, so yeah don't mind my review. As english is not my first language, I'm writing in my main language and then translating it and then editing what I think it doesn't click right. So I will say 3 stars for writing quality. The story in my head is prety much advanced and will constantly change so, I can't really say much. 4 stars As for the characters, well I have afantasia (idk if thats the word in english) so I don't visualize shit, but I tried my best to cover the characters with actions and personality. 3 stars. Update stability theres none so 0 stars. In general, I think my novel is mainly story wise. And even so this genre of people getting reincarned or transmigrated into a dating sim is kinda becoming more and more cliché so touché!

    Why a Speedrunner Dislikes Otome Games
    Fantasi · MrNewWorld
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  • MrNewWorld
    MrNewWorld14d
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    imagine the reaction of the player (supposing there is one in this AU of the game) when they see this: 'Oh yeah, the couple and that attendant are for sure the major villains of this game for sure!'

    Then, through the cracks of the still closed door, heavy half-liquid-half-gas-like darkness started pouring disturbingly as if the carriage was bleeding.
    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasi · Sound_Hammer
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  • MrNewWorld
    MrNewWorld2mth
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    Bro speedruned the stone age school LOL

    So due to my Mother's history as a teacher in the village, she was excited to learn that I am interested in learning, because unlike my older sisters and brothers which unlike me, are healthy physically and great hunters of the village but, most of them only learned the most basic of everything/ average in IQ, so my mother was a bit disappointed as she wanted to have more people in the village that wanted to discuss the history of the town. And when she learned, I was a genius when I showed her how easy I was able to understand the lessons she taught me, such as the common sense of living in the village. She started teaching me more advanced classes, which I mostly already knew at the time.
    Dr Stone:The Origin of Magic[Dropped]
    Komik · LazySatanixDevil
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