WildCatMan
A random guy with a simple taste.
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WildCatMan13dBalas EftheeI don't care about low ratings, except for the unreasonable ones, so don't apologize, I know how crappy the main character is and how shitty the system works. You can read it right from the review I gave, in fact, just a few days ago. But grammar, huh? I'll pass you the "I'm not a native English speaker" card. What I did was write the story from my language, translated it through DeepL and edited it, and then uploaded it. About quoting MC's thoughts from ([ & ]) instead of (' & '), it's simply because it's easier for me to write it. Still, where did you get the idea that the heroine has to get into trouble for the main character to get their diary heroine? Taking the story seriously is a bit of a mistake. And I wasn't trying to quickly give ALL the heroine to the main character, or introducing them in a riotous manner. Up to Chapter 24 (Spoiler), he has 8 Diaries with slow introductions to the respective characters in question, and his relationship with them is established as best as I can. What's so weird about the main character not being able to leave the person who's about to die? Remember that it's a POV 1. Why do you think I have to write all the reasons for the main character's actions as clearly as possible? There is such a thing as character development, and actually, not even long after Chapter 8, he already gave the answer to the question of "why" he can't just leave Ai to die, or why he acted to establish relationships with people of his age.
- WildCatMan13dBalas DopaminadosCh 1 Hoshino Ai
- WildCatMan15dBalas That1OtakuDude
Apathetic MC is boring, honestly, and since I hadn't write for about two to three months since Chapter 15/16, I just couldn't help but think "Why the hell did I create such a boring MC?"
[—actually, why should I care about the others?] - WildCatMan15dBalas That1OtakuDude
You can tell me. I won't just force them into the story right away, but I could make them appear step by step.
(As a reward for raising Shiina Mahiru's Flag, you get Kosaki Onodera's Heroine Diary!) - WildCatMan15dBalas shambe
That whole Chapter feels cringe🤧
However, when I broke free from my chains, it doesn't mean that Ai would be the one standing with me by the end. - WildCatMan15dBalas LavendorCh 22 That One Guy Everyone Hates
- WildCatMan15dBalas shambeCh 12 Yes, I'm A Simp
- WildCatMan15dBerkomentar
Nanako Onodera
"Don't worry!" The shopkeeper lady, Onodera's mother, interjected excitedly. She was an energetic woman. "I can give you descriptions of every good one. Haha, Kosaki got acquainted with this handsome boy and pretty girl? Not bad." - WildCatMan15dBerkomentar—there was Onodera—the only heroine I hadn't interacted with yet—as the daughter of the shop owner.
- WildCatMan17dBalas INVELNIME"Ohh, is this your supposed first friend?" One of them moved closer to me.
- WildCatMan17dBalas INVELNIME
Dari Fans Page Facebook. Lupa namanya apa, tapi mereka ngasih Ilustrasi AI Karakter Anime berseragam Sekolah Indonesia.
"Ohh, is this your supposed first friend?" One of them moved closer to me. - WildCatMan17dBalas INVELNIME
It's an Alternate Universe. She's the same old Ichinose but just not enrolled in ANHS/CoTE's Universe.
For one, that woman with the long pink hair, Honami Ichinose. - WildCatMan17dBerkomentar
Ichika Nakano
She was sitting diagonally to my left, next to Hikigaya. To her left was Kirisaki, and to the left again was Ichika, one of the quintuplets. - WildCatMan17dBerkomentarA girl with blonde hair in a ponytail offered that to me cheerfully.
- WildCatMan18dBalas nazrin992Ch 19 Kirisaki Wishes to Make Friends (2)
- WildCatMan18dBerkomentarWhen I went into the classroom, I found only one person in the classroom, Komi Shouko.
- WildCatMan18dBalas WildCatManShe had long blond hair, and an appearance worthy of what you would typically call a gyaru, but didn't seem to act like one. To begin with, her posture reminded me of a zombie, in contrast to the upbeat nature of gyaru (which I thought they were). She lacked vitality, with her eyes somehow seemed almost lifeless, and her voice held true to her appearance, lackluster.