Hahaha, thanks for reading and commenting. I emphasize that I am a novice and writing is just a hobby (it's not like I'm getting paid, haha). But I don't have time to change or improve the story. That's secondary since I'm busy with exams and that's my priority. I will follow your advice to improve the story. Thanks for reading the work.

Thanks

Honestly friend I have no idea but I would like to read it

I apologize for any grammatical errors or confusing parts in my writing. I'm currently busy with exams, which are very important. Additionally, please remember that I'm a novice and writing is just a hobby for me, haha. Maybe I'll create a Patreon and hire an editor, but in any case, thank you very much for your understanding.

THANKS

Hello everyone, I am Pixel, a novice author without experience. English is not my native language and I am just starting to learn it properly. Therefore, I would appreciate any constructive feedback on how to improve. Additionally, I would love to receive ideas to continue this beautiful story. I am not shy, so I give myself 5 stars, haha. Goodbye!