nice one Ãuthor

This is great. Try it out for yourself. A properly developed story. Definitely in my collection

The suspense Nice one author I love the flow, the vocabulary and the suspense .Good Job 👏

I honestly don't know how to describe this book.It's great in every aspect.

Chapter 4 where's the fourth chapter!

This chapter and the previous one is really.... really good.I got too lost reading, i forgot to comment on the first chapter and almost forgot the second.Keep it up author, your doing a great job.

Lol, I know I'm being insensitive, but, i laughed my butt off after reading that our mc is bald.This is going to be a fun ride with our unique bald mc.

Wish i had one

Oh, the tragedy of having to learn the painful truth

This is the kind of story that you follow to see how things ends, where it leads to. I'm rating it this, because writing quality still needs work, but, the story outline is a work of art.I'm never leaving this book, even of it has the worst writing quality

I would really love to see where this goes

update author, Update!I'm begging you please 🙏🥺

did i just read that half an hour just disappear into twelve minutes in just two sentences?

You have or you've.

use your quotation marks

who's caly? I thought it was valu

echoes

You

so not do