bluecero

...since when does one...chain a motorcycle when parking...

you can dance if you wanna... you can leave yo friends behind... cuz if..

"where was i?" ... you were there, monologuing an entire chapter with text filler.

ah yes, the standard danmachi fanfic. obsess about getting perfect stats as a level one for a hundred or two chapters. it's like reincarnation stories that spend a hundred chapters explaining how a toddler got really buff.

only 39 chapters before the ol' disgusting chinese trope of world hopping with a massive nerf?

really. MC is right back to being worthless? this time your not just screwing him, but literally trying to screw him by some guy? tf

this really sucks. it was such an enjoyable read, but now it's challenging to continue. like going from reading to scrolling and reading once every few sentences, hoping it gets better in some way.

this is canon babysitting. you're draw was the overused "well hurr it's fate." so if fate happens either way, canon stays the same, and now you just have an average ability protag that really can't influence much beyond, "hey i got some valis, and I bullied some meaningless side characters." he basically has not much for social interactions, grinds in the dungeon repeatedly, an absent God and familia for the most part; and yet hasn't really gained anything for multiple chapters. the plot device and the entire premise has been built on is the scavenger system; yet the gains were first nerfed into the ground, and then later removed almost all together...if you don't include randomly mentioning a skill or two he gained days later as a passing thought. now he finally uses them, takes a loss, and you as an author somehow believe it's viable to give a huge middle finger instead of finally having some type of tangible gain for his efforts and skill. just wtf?

so the last few chapters is MC playing babysitter for canon with no gain? why not have him blow bell while you're at it.

wait.... we aren't nerfing and crippling him instantly after using his power once are we?