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Averagewrites5dBalas Naman_7331Okay, i see what you mean, ill take time to edit all the names to his firstname
Arriving at the his family Manor, Gates with Yusuf right behind him as the guard from before saw them and opened the Gates, informing them about be arrival of four other knights that have been waiting for at least thirty minutes.- Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_RavenCh 7 SEVEN...
- Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_Raven
yeah
"HAHAHAHAH this will be fun." - Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_Raven
and she's the first, he put his seal.
With the feats and power she would achieve and gain in the future, and further help he would give to her, he would definitely grow stronger than her always. He was sure he was stronger than her currently, going by stats alone, then if the magic ability were to grow too...No doubt he would be a very strong one man army, but it wasn't enough. - Averagewrites7dBalas
it's not the main tho, Gates is higher in stats because of his ability, its several times multiplied from hers, so she and his stats cannot be the same.
With the feats and power she would achieve and gain in the future, and further help he would give to her, he would definitely grow stronger than her always. He was sure he was stronger than her currently, going by stats alone, then if the magic ability were to grow too...No doubt he would be a very strong one man army, but it wasn't enough. - Averagewrites7dBalas mehdi123
hm? Còol
"Ha... let's have a talk, Yusuf," Gates said, betting on the knowledge he has to come out alive. - Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_Raven
😂indeed
Should he say he missed his life on earth? Should he actually think of the need to leave this magical place with limitless potential on his part for what? A medium life of having to work for a software company, code, eat, sleep, goof off and repeat? No, this world was going to be his milestone...It would only get better from here, or worse, whichever as long as he could predict the next movements and pace of the plot from what he had read. - Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_Raven
indeed, she does. she has a special bloodline or ability that arises amongst orcs but humans too alike...the same thing that she has, Yusuf has it. what is it?
With the feats and power she would achieve and gain in the future, and further help he would give to her, he would definitely grow stronger than her always. He was sure he was stronger than her currently, going by stats alone, then if the magic ability were to grow too...No doubt he would be a very strong one man army, but it wasn't enough. - Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_Raven
😂😂 sometimes I do...you'll understand my temperament from Gates...hopefully not everything about him.
"HAHAHAHAH this will be fun." - Averagewrites7dBalas Detective_RavenCh 7 SEVEN...
- Averagewrites11dBalas Ali_Ceyhun
really? I didn't know it was a common name there, cool.
"Ha... let's have a talk, Yusuf," Gates said, betting on the knowledge he has to come out alive. - Averagewrites13dBalas raizell24Ch 22 TWENTY-TWO...
- Averagewrites17dBalas Tidas
ah, I see....no shaking I get you.
...A few moments ago... - Averagewrites18dBalas Nasty_Bich
you get right?
Giving them a message to wait as be relays their arrival to the Family head, they said nothing and did as they were told...A high ranked Knight served as just the Gate keeper of the Family, who are they to speak further when relayed with the message that their arrival will as well be relayed to the Family head, The Boogeyman. - Averagewrites19dBalas Tidas
Well, plot points are all fine and all. But I don't think that starting the chapter with a flashback is even remotely considered bad. let's use this novel for instance, Gates really had nothing interesting going on in his regular life except his mental challenges, I introduced him in such a way to show that he had prior issues to being alone in a dorm room. his anger issues to throw away his phone and now, inside the novel, his every action and word is a testament to the side of him that I did not explain from his regular life...a life of rich madness, I call it. Honestly, it's my first time seeing someone say the problem with the novel is the flashback, as it was unnecessary..?
...A few moments ago... - Averagewrites19dBalas Tidas
Well, I understand what you mean, though the concept of flashbacks aren't subject to how much time has elapsed but the event, of importance that is needed from such a time lapse.
...A few moments ago... - Averagewrites19dBalas God_Ofshows
ohhh I understand you now 🤣🤣 yeah he didn't meet the original mc. However, that's what makes their meeting to be the most interesting one...at least to me. this may be a spoiler...but isn't it amazing that Sar'har is Sarah? Gates is Amon...what do you think? we're they the only ones.
Listening to the ramblings of his youngest child, ramblings indeed but the mere malice in those words and the loon in his eyes reminded Theodore of himself years before he met their mother, his wife.