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a great story also the way Author approached the timeline which hasn't been shown up in original one piece anime and the way Mc power works also the mysteries regrading the system its very satisfying it feels natural i will give 9/10

i will give you some of my personal review from reading many fanfic if you write a fanfic plz don't remind us in every chapter that how far Mc had came or how he is proud of himself really also what the hell is that side characters monologue of you have strength but thats not your way plz consider you words before you write them

my honest review . its the best fanfic i have read so far the fact that author made a whole new story is very good

i read until training arc but really its disappointment mc has madara and hashirama power but he feels like a total random Shinobi also what the hell 170 kg wait really bro its one piece world you know how much weight zoro lifted before war the physical strength in this world should be higher but you didn't make it also how the hell mc can't use proper Ninjutsu also why make mc,s eye pathetic he can't even use susano you know how Uchiha used their mangekyo after first time the got it the blitz their opponents and what did you show is he barley used 1 to 2 times and then he tire himself you have no sense of story

all in all its good read only few things i don't like first Mc,s name its strange like you are reading and their are two name Rob and Robin you can guess its feels wrong now 2nd the wording like brother Rob and finally the ship spirit name is Chinese

honestly i really liked this novel but it is not my type the fact that Mc is whole into brotherhood with doflamingo I can't accept as you know one piece world is truly tragic world death slavery abuse of authority and many more crimes but out of all things you had to make mc dream of becoming a king do you know how much blood will be spilled and lets not get into mc whole personality he is a merger of two souls one kind and another Dark but you showed us that mc wholeheartedly understand the suffering of common people but what about his brother as you know doflamingo is cruel to his core even mc could not change it but still mc says that he will make his brother king so no that is not how i like it

the fanfic is ok but power levels are messed up at some point it like a character is op next moment some shit happens and character start to loose like when mc went to war with WB he said WB is stronger the .he is but the at last scene where the main enemy came mc literally became strong as WB or even greater so the power system is little messed up but all over its ok i read until 150

i thought i will just continue to read this but you Author have a talent for making worst experience of people novel is supposed to about gamble and you decided to put girls it was ok i mean but then you just had to make dozen of girls in his harem really and what waste person he is wasting his potential on sex and always sex no training in initial chapters he did but after that he fucked up in two month time skip he did sex more then training also what the hell is mc stupid for no reason wanting to kill a warlord and then decide to be on the run fucking pussy sorry author but i hate to say this is my biggest mistake reading it

i realy like this novel if only you could have just given one ability to every strawhat like kenny gaining one thor abilities and zoro gaining only yorrichi ability and rest will depend on there own .hard work like practise haki overall i enjoyed it

how should i put it this fanfic is normal not too good nor too bad the reason i don't like this nove is simple if a person who transmigrate in one piece from normal world he would know how dangerous world is also how important is exercise also if mc has no clear definition of his end goal he will always be weak no matter what in onepiece world you have to choose sides if mc has chosen straw hat then he should be clear about what he has to do also if you ever thought about it Haki is not that difficult to master but time consuming mc has time but he wasted it on some no name pirate why because he felt save there if you want to decide mc laid back plz don't write onepiece fanfic bcz onepiece is all about struggle sorry if i offended you but thats just my opinion