its fine just went straight to the story which is cool but chp 3 is what making me drop it as it seems 2 dc girls (not naming) is in his universe instead of him traveling as i thought he just go but then i also got annoyed by the typical anime trope of an angry mom so cary the dad and son runs just best of luck.

he dropped like 18 when he was writting including all the rewrites he done so prob 9 or if lower 5

Girls in dxd its pointless

why the oc maid/hilda sister you just adding more when theres already enough

its alright just not the idea i thought it'll be as i guess dc or2 of them came to his world insteadd of him going to dc but best of luck and your writting could use more emotion into it and don't keep going with the scary mom theme...

i'll say so since alot of People on webnovel hates it/Harem i don't really have an problem but it can also make people more intreasted since its unique so tough choice.

its says romance but is there actually any?

Yo author wondering if you still gonna continue and please give an heads if its an break please you can lose alot of people if not and are you dropping or not

Very true just can't seem to comprehend how nerfed they are...

Trust me it's not even close to being that good or the best its bad

Its awful anyways

5 sets of powers and couldn't be an powerhouse is an massive L

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Just an massive recomendation don't read i'll saying this to save you time and hopes author can remake this and up his strangth massivly or just end it there is no power system or even with 5 diffrent sets of powers struggaling...

its descent a little trouble reading but my main problem is the powers and him being hella weak atleast for me he seems to be stronger than sona queen but thats when i preety much left i can't see him being an powerhouse or maou level its just maddening.

Its a translation heads also spoiler his sister dies over something so easy to fix like why and then jumps around worlds of HP to bring her back.

I don't know about smart it'll just cause more problems along the way...

(Work)

you want this to be 3 chaps long?

Ong I was not expecting this to be this good Great worm