Hi, could you please review the first few chapters of my book and tell me how i am doing. You seem very genuine. I hope you have the time :)

Hi, could you please review the first few chapters of my book and tell me how i am doing. You seem very genuine. I hope you have the time :)

Could you please review my book? I want to know how i’m doing and what things i need to change for it to be perfect. Hope you have the time!

Could you also review my book? You seem genuine by the way you review others. Let me know what i can do better if you have the time.

Yes i will thanks!

Could you also read my first chapters and give me a review on how i am doing?you seem very genuine and honest.

Could you also read my first chapters and give me a review on how i am doing?you seem very genuine and honest.

Good start to the novel, can’t wait to read more. Keep posting more chapters 😁

Said (the)* man standing… Cool start just make sure you read everything twice before going to the next sentence 😄 I’m going to finish reading your chapters!

Thanks! I will do my best to continue :)