Gamer_Fantasy

hello readers let's be honest here can you see the images i put in "Character illustrations'?"🤔🥱

You can look at the "character illustrations" i have assigned an image there to see.

Vanisa

Selena

Gray

Liza

This novel will having a serous re-write in after 2 years.

it's more compressed plasma blades since it is soo compressed the bullets will only slide because the energy blades has powerful enough energy to push off it's tragictory not enough time to melt, just like the water jet hose is flowing soo fast and if you try to throw something like a small branch it will flung away, that is why the bullets will be deflected rather than melt not enough time.

Sorry i was rushing the story and the unnatural part is mostly in lack of character depth, i was soo focused in the hook than the character depth has been reduced, it's oky the recent chapters has been improved consistency and now it has balanced pacing specially in interconnected eliminating the unnatural way and more depths,details,and proper world building.

Sorry for the spoiler mostly her other part of her body has still organ in it intact.