Ralph_Fourie

I love the intro

The main story itself is very intriguing. It's like a roller coaster of emotional action suspense and exictment. I had to take time to read through the sentences carefully to fully get a grasp of the story and it's worth it

It's quite captivating

It's very touching poetry

This has really captured my interestthe authors flow of ideas is really easy to follow. It's quite the touching story thus far. I recommend it, definitely absolutely touching story.

Im happy that you read my book I feel encouraged to keep on writing. More chapters are on the way

There are rouge security machines roaming about (spoiler warning)

Teen romance, it's all about young love here. I love your design of the character Cassandra Your story development is really good and easy to follow The way you put à separate paet for the characters thoughts is excellent

It's very intriguing

The haunted house it's getting exciting 👻👻