INFINUX

Your character is quite interesting.... Her attitude is where portrayed .. It shows her behavior from her life before this reincarnation cycle then the life and frustration of a being that keeps suffering and not making it or living up to a year... Then you highlighted the emptiness already settling in ..which relates more with what your character has gone through... A marvelous world... The God also showed and the fact that it called her daughter creates a wide branch you can go to... Is she really a God's child... Then what must she predict....what future will she see... Etc.. Will she eventually find out about the fact that she is a God's child... The grammar... World building is on point. Especially the discussions.. interaction.. Conversation between characters is well done... You are talented bro and your novel is wonderful... Keep up the good work...it got me hooked ... For lovers of reincarnation mixed with an interesting MC.. This is the one for them ..

This novel is good.the synopsis already showcases what this novel is about and you have a rough idea already. The power system is a popular one so even if the auxiliary volume is skipped you can still understand it Chapter 1 is all about introducing the MC... The mystery around him.. How strong is he?.. The brief mentions of his feats in the chapters that follows lays out an incredible world and of course.. The world is an immortal cultivation world... So we expect realms... It is an interesting story and a nice one too... A good and unique cultivation novel. It follows other cultivation novels but has it's own unique traits that makes it stand out.. ....my only thought is that at chapter 10... Those guys should have killed him and let him re awaken and realize... This kind of world he wants to live comes with a price. He has to be strong enough to actually live in peace. His death will signify this and maybe something related to his power will give him a second life... Kind of a rebirth... After all he is the eternal sage .... This will make it more impactful and your readers will understand it more... Another motive... In his first life.he wants to surpass his limit.. In this life he just wanted a peaceful life from the get go.... But he realized through his death that the peaceful life comes with having enough strength ...

Nice cultivation story.. The tense atmosphere... Starting from when she stabbed him and thought he was dead to him awakening was nice slow pace infact and will keep the readers that love this type of novel hooked... It is a good work bro...well done brother... Glimpse of this world's powerhouses are seen with talks of the absolute demon... That's makes me imagine how crazy and indifferent your MC will be... I like his speech too... It clearly shows how dangerous, cruel, indifferent your MC is... You really show case what a demon is truly... Nice bro.. This is a beautiful piece bro . A nice cultivation novel The potential is high..

i am given a system not given to a system

hmm what can i say .if you are looking for a novel with a human with a beast clone then this is the one. a great novel.. love it .

❤️ i gave you my heart already .. you are giving yours now ? hehehe

who else is it's not your hubby

good work wifey .. you are so doing well ❤️‍🩹