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Nope. They all lazy but hufflepuffs atleast arent backstabbers like griffyndors in the tri wizard. In hufflepuff, hed hpget proper support

Nothing interesting. The so called fourth member knows whats going to happen but actively does not use any knowledge and merely reacts like an npc. Doesnt even warn his friends or give a heads up. Its like inserting a random friend number 4 in the main characters group but he does not have anything to add and merely a background character. Utterly pointless

Mc is a jerk for not giving harry a heads up despite knowing what was going to happen

Again not using his future shit, a decent friend would have given harry a heads up

For a reincarnator he hasnt used his knowledge so far. I personally would hve steered harry away from the weaslys. Ron was just dragging him down and kept betraying him with just a few rumors. His only real worth was that he had the rat so he was the key to sirius being declared innocent. Other than that, i wouldnt be friends with a jerk like him if he was the last kid on earth

Not impressed with the writting style. As of the latest chapter upon writting this, the chapters are mostly full of narration with barely any dialogue and interactions. Its like reading about a wall. Really rather boring. The world building has a few inconsitencies. Like how the fuck dumbledore knows about a random kid he never met when the kid has not even done anything noteworthy? He even has an initial impression? Wtf author? Normaly i check out fics even early ones with barely any chapters but to have a decent folowing, you need something to hook in readers. So far its been nothing but boring narration with a lot of pot holes

This is absurd. How can dumbls know anything about some random kid he never met? Unless he has spys inside house black, he should be in total darkness apart from any possible published achievemnts if any. Another possible leak is if blacks had social bragging parties like malfoys. Other than those, it is just not possible for dumble to be even remotely aware of the mc.

So a reincarnator cant do shit against a rude kid? Nah im out. Fck this

Grammar is rather bad

Was an enjoyable read but a little disappointed there wasnt any love story between mc and hermione or any other girl. Also disappointed that the poster stopped updating and last one sas 1 year ago.