BlackMountainKing
Life is nothing but a collection of stories.
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I will but that will be later.
Once again, I want to apologize for no uploading new chapters. I have been busy working on my original novel 'Lord of the Stories' (LOTS). I used the novel 'Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint' (ORV) as a reference for the story. - BlackMountainKing1dBerkomentarCh 2 Chapter 2: A Shy Smile
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Well, since this is my own novel, I'm going to give a shameless 5 star review. As you may have already noticed, I used 'Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint' as a reference for my novel. Of course, there is no harem. The story revolves around tragedy and has a dark theme but there will be some romance elements here and there. However, don't get your hopes up or else you will be heartbroken in the end. If you have any questions about the story, you can leave a comment below. Read this story and remember it. More importantly, let the story bless you. (I want to hurt you as much as possible 😈)
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I barely give reviews but It seems I have to give a review for this story. I've read your story and think it is a great story. But I have to ask. What are the negative effects of the MC instant rebirth? Does he just die and get up as if nothing has happened. Does he lose his morality to a greater power? Anyways, I wanted to say I like this story. Please Author, continue to write this story. Oh, right! Let's chat on discord.
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I don't have much experience writing reviews but I will try my best. The world building is good and the writing quality is also good. Although there are a few writing errors here and there but they can be ignored. I like how intense the first chapter was. All the emotions were properly expressed. The only problem I have with this novel is that the sentences are unnecessarily long. No reader likes to read through a very long paragraph. it makes them lose interest very quickly. Some people are very lazy, you know. Anyways, apart from that, this is a pretty good novel. Continue to write, and improve your skills as a writer. May the story bless you.
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