ImmortalDoctor
Life is nothing but a collection of stories.
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ImmortalDoctor1hBalas Ashim_beastThanks for the information, I'll correct it later.
"Even after the world fell into destruction, nothing is free in this world. Food is scarce and a new currency called Coins has replaced Yen."- ImmortalDoctor13hBalas SkillsMasterAkurai
It's not a mistake. Angell is an actual name of Greek origins meaning 'Messenger of God'. It's a variant of the name 'Angela' .
Angell's tone was confident, yet it echoed with a hint of desperation, as if trying to convince herself that survival was still a possibility. - ImmortalDoctor2dBalas SkillsMasterAkuraiCh 40 Episode 9 – Protagonist (4)
- ImmortalDoctor3dBalas CheekClapper2K
Is it? or was I mistaken?
(T/L: 100,000 US dollars = 15,305,900 yen) - ImmortalDoctor5dBalas SkillsMasterAkuraiCh 39 Episode 9 – Protagonist (3)
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- ImmortalDoctor7dBalas Imaginary_Guy
Yeah
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- ImmortalDoctor8dDiterbitkan
Time to write a review. But I do, i just want to say I'm brutally honest when writing reviews. in any case, let's begin. I must say, this story is unique in its own way. It has an amazing concept but it was difficult for me to read. I suggest the author reread his work and edit some things to make the story easier to read and understand. Apart from that, I think this will make an interesting story.
- ImmortalDoctor8dBerkomentarCh 13 :Dark Purple Blood Dungeon
- ImmortalDoctor10dBalas SkillsMasterAkurai
Thank you. If you notice any more errors, please tell me.
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - ImmortalDoctor11dBalas SkillsMasterAkuraiCh 17 Episode 4 – Hunting (2)
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- ImmortalDoctor16dBalas BlakLord
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It's that time of the day. Time to leave an honest review. I must say, this story is pretty decent. The plot is interesting and new. Although there are a few grammatical errors, they can be ignored. Overall, it's a good story. If the Author improves his writing then this book will reach its full potential. Can't wait to see how the story progresses.
- ImmortalDoctor17dDiterbitkan
I must say this story is so good that I have to write a review. Overall, the writing quality is good, the plot and romance was done nicely. Although the isekai plot of dying by trunk-kun is overused, who doesn't like trunk-kun? I feel like it deserves to have its character seeing how it is used all the time. Anyways, I have one complaint though. it's the spacing! Please, space your work! I can't stress how important this is! No reader likes reading a very long paragraph. It just kills the mood. That's the only thing keeping me back from giving a complete five star review. Continue writing this story, Author. May the story bless you.
- ImmortalDoctor17dBerkomentarCh 1 The Interview